On Thursday morning school started and I was still in bed. I rushed around the house searching for my bag so that I could get ready. Finally a few moments later I was all sorted and ready. As I arrived at school everyone started to say, "Hi." I was very happy to see my friends and start to learn with new classmates.
Hi timote
ReplyDeleteIt must've been very exciting for you to meet your friends again. But to be honest ,I think your paragraph would of made a little more sense ,if you had put a comma before the sentence ,I was all sorted and ready.But you did great :)